April 2 - Limits
The camera refused to take the pictureof people walking on the bridge todaywe can’t put the box of ashes in the car,too full of other things to contemplatepurple mouths instead of pink tulip...
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Ha, you did better at "randomizing" than I did. Intriguing that the camera refused to take a picture -- and I was hoping to hear more of that. You know, any one of these stanzas might be the start of...
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Yes, this "random" poem has the feel of a ghazal, and could easily be turned into one me thinks. I am fond of S2 and also the camera "refusing." They have a way of doing that. Great!
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What Gretasue said about a ghazal! I especially love the first and sixth couplets. Such strong images in this throughout, though--"our fat shaking" (ha!) and a "passel" (great word) of "black arms"....
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oh - good job being random! The couplets are brilliant. Yes ghazal like for sure with each being part of the whole but almost poem unto themselves. Good job Judy!
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I really like the last couplet. It sets this random poem into a world of its own.
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Thank goodness this is random. I thought my brain was malfunctioning again. S6 doesn't seem at all random!
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this one, and the last couplet are my favourites. And the last one is stamp-ilicious. so to speak. the rhythms of Zumba like a mix of samba and the Mexican hat dance with our fat shaking that's just...
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Wow! What a wonderful job at randomizing on your "limits" theme. I love "purple mouths instead of pink tulip blooms hang above the wilted leaves on my countertop' and everything else.
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Amazing poem, Judy. Almost feels like a ghazal without the requisite rhyme & repeated phrase. Every couplet has something to admire. Especially love the final one.
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Wow ok so is this randomized or what?Love it all, but really loveda passel of black arms thrown up into the skyfrozen in an early gray-tucked dusk
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